Thursday, June 19, 2008

Gone With The Summer Wind

First things first, this is a poem written by yours truly, ME. I am planning to use this poem for my Art Appreciation class. Though this poem needed to be finished and furnished more, I already formulated the first three stanzas and I will update this blog after I've finalized my work. Constructive criticism will be very much welcomed.



Summer's wind is finally over
Habagat is here to conquer
She was the voice of my summer
It is as sweet as her voice

Now, summer's over, is it really gone?
Hearing your melodious voice is over
Fast paced days changed my life
Your voice is all I need to relieve the tension

I know we need to bid thee goodbye
Gently, my mind sinks into confusion
Is it going to be temporary or is it really over?
I can't stand but to speculate my timid mind.

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